Poem: Visitors in Dreams

Visitors in Dreams

The ones who visit
are not silent
or kind, but
they are not always
remembered, or
they may have been there
without being noticed,
though they clambored,
made certain to speak
in voices too loud
not to cause a stir,
but what they said,
no one wants to know,
no one wishes it to be
and it is forgotten,
because it seems too much
and it might be the truth,
but that is only worse.
They are not silent,
but they can be forgotten
and they are never kind
and will not leave
until they are through,
but that is the way of it
and it may be
that is a kindness,
that what comes of it
is what must come,
that it must be
or this will remain.
They have come.
Do you think
they came 
to be here
for themselves?
They have come.
Look how they are,
how they seem.
They have come,
are visiting,
because it is needed,
is what must be done.
That is the way of it.
They know.
They will say it,
will tell that truth
as any other
that they know.
They are here
to do what is needed,
to speak.
They have come
and they are here
and no one
will notice it,
no one wants it.
But they will not go,
either, and, remember,
they are not kind.

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